In my essays I believe that I have some trouble in breaking up my argumentative sentences, and I tend to make them to be a run on sentence.  When I believe that I have a really good argument, I want to get it all down on paper so that I don’t forget or miss anything that I want to write down. Although, when I am doing this I tend to write more than one argument in a single sentence. Just now I almost did it at least once while I was writing my first sentence, but I stopped myself. I feel that I am learning to do it the right way already after just reading the passage once.

I chose to write about chapter eight. This chapter was solely based on  getting out of the habit of connecting your sentences without making them go on longer than they should. It gave me a list of words useful to make your sentences connect correctly and make them run smoothly with out just blurting your arguments out. I found these to be very useful and intend to use them on my final essay. I chose to read this chapter because I remembered it being very interesting and helpful when I had to read it for my blog eleven. I also thought it could give me useful tips on my final essay.

I used the techniques that were suggested in this chapter and found it to be very helpful. I was able to make my sentences that sounded to be said with out stopping or think, into sentences that sounded very planned and well thought of before putting it on paper. I used a few of the words listed in the chapter and they really help me create well worded sentences.